12 days of xmas email…

First up, who is this email from? The lack of Christian Aid branding and an obvious mention of the organisation is really stark to me. Their supporters will have to be well aware that Present Aid is their sub brand for virtual gifts. No logo and only mentioning the organisaiton deep into the body copy will have people reaching for delete until they discover it’s from an organisaiton they trust.

Secondly, I think this email is a bit confused about what it’s trying to get me to do. Is it selling Present Aid? Is it a feedback (I haven’t bought from them before), is it content about their celeb’s trip to Tanzania? I’m confused! A clear call to action and a single minded proposition is an absolute essential in an email – more so than any other communication. What needs to happen should be clearly marked above the fold, but there’s nothing here doing that (fold indicated by black line of image below).

present aid email with graphics enabled

Thirdly, copy errors in the final paragraph make this seem very sloppy and slap dash. Proof reading before pressing send costs nothing.

Finally, the data opt out is to opt out of 12 days of Christmas emails. What if I want to opt out of all communications? Or all present aid ones? What happens to communications from Christian Aid if I opt out here? I think they’ve tried to give the supporter choice here, but without a crisp explanation this just adds to more confusion.

I do like the creative look. It feels quite clean and simple – not over designed. I also like the header copy before the link to the html version – this introduces a bit of the content of the email and gives it a bit of intrigue and CTA to open the email, rather than just “click here if you can’t see the images” which tells you nothing about what’s inside.

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